【题目要求】
你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏,现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛,并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况,并给出你对他的建议。
要求:(1)内容包含所提供的信息,可适当发挥;(2)书写认真,句子通顺;(3)词数:60词左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
【参考译文】
杰克是我的朋友。他非常喜欢玩电脑游戏。他经常坐在同样的方式太长而不移动。现在他头痛,眼睛疼,背疼。他晚上睡不好,所以他每天都觉得累。
我认为他应该离开电脑休息。他不该长时间使用电脑。他应该做眼保健操,放松眼睛,晚上早睡。
我想如果他好好休息,他很快就会好的。