The visit to the Great Wall
My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling very much. Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with my family.
It was fine that day. We went there by bus early in the morning. When we got there, there were many other visitors there. when my family and I went onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(风景). We all were amazed(惊讶的) by how beautiful it was. We took quite a few photos there.
We had a good time there. The time flew by, and soon we had to go back. I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!
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参观长城
我叫萧明，非常喜欢旅游。去年夏天，我和家人一起去了长城。
那天天气很好。我们一早就乘公共汽车去那儿。当我们到达那里时，那里还有许多其他的游客。我和我的家人去到长城的时候，我们看到了美丽的风景。我们都很惊讶它是多么美丽。我们拍了不少照片。
我们在那儿玩得很开心。时间飞逝，我们很快就要回去了。旅行后我很累，但我真的很喜欢游览长城!